Monday, December 24, 2012

उदास पानी






वो देर तक आईने में
चेहरा टटोलती रही
उभरते हुई गड्ढे
और झुर्रियों को पाटने में,
हाँ, उसने एक उम्र बिताई थी!
याद नही, कब पिछली बार
उसने चेहरे से बातें की थी,
कभी उससे पूछा हो,
ये उदासी क्यूँ?
अहह! इस उदासी को
बयाँ करती वो झुर्रियाँ
अब खाई बन चुकी थी!

10 comments:

  1. Time changes a lot but the emotions are just planted in us. Loved the way you portrayed the feelings using aging as a symbol.

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  2. Never knew an age related poem could be so beautiful and meaningful..very well portrayed!

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  3. गहन अर्थ समेटे रचना।

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  4. An awesome poem, only some have the magnificence to bring forth such beautiful observation embroidered in the form of poetry........

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  5. The flow of the poem and your choice of words...everything flowed very well and the imagery was a joy to read.

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    1. Thanks, for writing in. Delighted to know that the poem kept you engrossed :)

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